Oblivion
a little while longer
if you stare into oblivion
you will see that there are many answers
down there
and to get them
you just have to pay a small price
fire🔥
the fire our fire everything we built from everything we had Our nothing. sparks flew around a conflagration, That was burning fire growing on the liberated spirits once dying of pain -'18.12.13
another nice and sweet one, although short. i wish your poems were a little longer. don't you think they finish a little sooner than it should?
ReplyDeletejust a thought. keep writing. you have some great talent.
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DeleteThe main secret when it comes to writing a poem is to be able to amuse the reader but still not give away too much. I tend to keep my poems short only to keep the reader on his/her toes. Thank you, I really appreciate it.
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