Oblivion
a little while longer
if you stare into oblivion
you will see that there are many answers
down there
and to get them
you just have to pay a small price
Under the lampost
It was that cold November night, under the lampost, we watched as the shooting star passed by, you wished for her, and I wished for your wish to come true, because inside me a little ray of hope had begun to grow.
another nice and sweet one, although short. i wish your poems were a little longer. don't you think they finish a little sooner than it should?
ReplyDeletejust a thought. keep writing. you have some great talent.
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DeleteThe main secret when it comes to writing a poem is to be able to amuse the reader but still not give away too much. I tend to keep my poems short only to keep the reader on his/her toes. Thank you, I really appreciate it.
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