Winter❄️

⋅That cold winter day
                                                                                                                                    when I decided to                                                                                                                                    take a walk 
with life 
   I was determined to find all the answers
to all my question
but when I approached him 
he never really spoke 
he just let me talk 
and when he had gone 
and a little too late for me to realize 
I figured he had been answering all my questions 
the whole time⋅

                                                                                                                                 

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  1. Unknown21 November 2018 at 05:25

    Noice

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  2. aficionado21 November 2018 at 05:52

    "I decided to find out about
    all the answers to all my questions" is that you really meant? was wondering where there is a grammatical error in there?




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  3. aficionado2 December 2018 at 04:09

    ok. but do you really need the 'about' in there. doesn't convey the meaning and more correctly, without the about. i was just wondering ...

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